sodapoplunchbox

Hey Drawers! I hear you on this east coast heat, gosh that's why I'm inside reviewing! Nice story you have here (: It's cute, but I have a few things ...

Hey kitrosemon13! I love the song reference in the title, it's truly an powerful song (: and same with the Forever The Sickest Kids reference in the text, they are ...

Hey thegirlandthepen! This is an awesome opening you have here! I hope you plan on expanding what you wrote because I would read it. Because this is only a paragraph, ...

Hey austenite! Since the other reviewers have already touched upon most of the things I would, it will be a quick review here. You are talented in writing :) but ...

Hey trhwrites! You asked for a review, so here I am!! First thing I want to point out is the length. This is a really long post. Try to cut ...

You weren't kidding when you said nasty! I'm just joking (: Anyways, I think you could have written this with more taste as opposed to the upfront approach you took. ...

Hey you, I haven't seen you in a few hours! I'm a very close friend of desiredanime25, in fact, I introduced her to this site! It makes me sad that ...

LittlePetRock, can you review my story called The Decoy Dream? ( Chapter one or two is fine, whichever. If you want, I'll even review one of your stories! (: Thank ...

Hey AkiKerosin! You have taken a horrific topic and created a wonderful poem. It's a terrible situation the child is in and I think you've captured the terror through your ...

Oops! I forgot one last thing I was gonna address! Your title isn't compelling, it's very ordinary. I think you should rename it to something that will attract more people ...

Hey wishonafallingpetal! (cute username btw) Welcome to YWS!! I'm sodapoplunchbox here to review your work This was a sad, yet adorable poem. Overall it is a good poem, but in ...

Hello retrodisco666! Your poems never cease to bring raw emotions to the table. This poem was intense, it kept me on the edge of my seat! I love that at ...

Hey Lilicia! Interesting character names, with Adam and Eve. A decent premise to a story, but I think you need to fix a few things to make it great! She ...

Hey wstoffel101! Welcome to YWS! I'm here to review your story(: This was good, but I feel like it was rushed. You should split this up into different chapters and ...

Hey Kiwisatsuma! I'm a major fan of scrubs, it's definitely one of my favorite TV shows! I think you did a good job here, I only have one thing to ...