sockmonkey

could you please review the first chapter of my book it is called inspector woolsome chapter 1.I will post another chapter when i find the post new work button.thanks,sockmonkey. :P

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dear ahmadblues, could you please review my work-in-progress story i am not sure how to post a link but the story is called inspector woolsome chapter one it is in ...

i liked your writing :)it seems like something that people could relate to .i could relate it to how i felt as a little kid before i got older and ...

truly great ,story the plot was descriptive and hooking and you moved the plot along at a good yeah please continue and my eyes are starting to hurt looking at ...

THUD THUD THUD.where is she thought the bony man in the trenchcoat as he sloshed across the muddy alley,his exfoliating leather boots clanked against the concrete,wait it was right in ...

i will post a longer chapter on monday and to answer your question i put exfoliating there to say his boots were peeling off you will see why i put ...

wow kinda spooked me when i saw it ,i would say this is good i liked how it sounded like one of those songs they play on the radio although ...

very good job i must say,very sad but the still it seemed real to me, like i could understand what jessie thought and why although it was a little confusing ...

THUD THUD THUD.big job ahead of me thought the bony man in the trenchcoat as he sloshed across the muddy alley,his exfoliating leather boots clanked against the concrete,ugh i have ...

I am new to this site and i do not really know that much about the mechanics of this site I could not find how so I am asking you ...