soccerstar17

This is soooo sweet! It makes me smile. I love the way the narartor spoke of her love. Truly bueatiful, nicely done. The last stanza is my favorite. :)

A shadow emerged out of the darkness and let out a laugh that sent chills down my spine. Who the figure was, I had no idea. It became clearer and ...

I loved this poem. I know poems don't have to rhyme but it is my favorite to read the ones that do. I just think it makes it more flowy ...

Wow, i really feel the pain of the narrarator. the love of her life will never come back! I thought that this was very good, but sad. Great job and ...

This is great, not at all like you had thought of it!! I liked how u made it rhyme because I just always think it gives poems a great rythym ...

I really loved this poem!! And it is true in most ways. I thought that it was really neat how everything fell together and the slow, beating rythym it had!! ...

Wow that was sooo neat and creative!! I thought that it was a great way to show how inspiration can come from anything in life

I liked your poem! It was short and sweet and simple, which made it kind of creepy. Keep writing, I would love to read more from you :)

Creepy, yet bueatiful and graceful! I enjoyed reading this, it gave me goosebumps. I hope to read more :)

WOW!!!! This was so emotional, and the last three lines just ripped my heart to pieces! I loved it so much, but it was sad. I hope you keep writing ...

I thought that this was a great poem!! You proved your point, it was simple, and very thoughtful. You could feel the emotions in it. Great job and keep writing!

This is really great and it reminded me a lot of beastly, where the girl loves the guy no matter what other people think. I thought it was bueatiful and ...

Wow, just wow!! I loved this poem it gave me chills of emotion. It was romantic, bueatiful, and a little eerie. It was well written! Good job :)

I really liked this poem, but it made me sad. I think it was bueatiful and very touching that the girl died just to be with the love of her ...

thanks so much for all the advice, I will try to do better next time! :)