soccerstar17

Hey my teacher just returned our stories graded and she didn't like mine. Knowing you guys did, helps a lot!!

Nicely done!! I like the flow in it and the creative idea you had. The first two stanzas were my favorite!! keep it up :smt002

I like this! It is so sweet and touching and it makes me smile. It is good to have someone in your life who can make you feel that way ...

That is a really neat poem! It was not what i expected at all! I liked how you ended it to tie everything together :D Good Job!!

hey I really like your poem. I like how your entire poem is basically a metaphor- life like a dying flame. I feel the charachters pain-in love but being bullyed ...

Wow!! I LOVE IT!! its so chilling and creepy. I like how you became Death, with a capital D. You made it become alive! You also rhymed it, which always ...

I really liked this its very sad though. I mean when is poetry ever happy? I liked the middle part- why the tears fall from my face as i lay ...

Ahhh! Thanks sooo much, I'm literally shrieking with excitement because you guys actually like my story!! Your comments mean sooo much to me. :)

Grrrrreat poem! I really liked it and definitly relate to it! That's how I always feel. I liked the unique on going flow because thats how ideas tend to work. ...

I changed the title. Is it better? If not, any suggestions?

thanks guys! I will try to figure in alex more when I go back and edit it. :)

Thanks for your reviews! This was just kind of a "spur of the moment" type thing. I am glad you liked it. It is love, but dream would work too ...

What Am I? I am in the room in which you sleep. I will hide in the depths of your mind. You can’t get rid of me, No matter how ...

Heyy! I really liked your poem. i loved that you made them rhymh, it gives it a nce soft flow. it shows what love means to you and i adore ...

I really liked your poem. I can relate to this; I hate going up to someone and your all excited and then you realize it is not them. It's really ...