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Those pictures were absolutly amazing. I must say that the one of the birds and that last are my absolute favorites. Where was this taken? The silloute is really cool. ...

Chapter 2: Lucy “Lucy, come one, we need to leave for school in five minutes,” my mom yells from downstairs. “One second mom, I'm coming,” I yell back. I only ...

I definatly agree with mlowe16, it really is a great poem. Someone mentioned that they thought that the last stanza should be changed to say something about how he decides ...

I really like that picture. I like how all the empisis and that I had to look really hard to even get close to figuring out what the darkened area ...

I really liked the poem as it had a great message but I thought that it was a little to plain as others have mentioned. Another stanza would work but ...

Chapter 1: Kate Dear Diary, I guess this is the last time I will be writing because as of tomorrow, I will no longer be here. I haven't decided whether ...

I love it especially in black and white. It woudn't be as special in color. Keep snapping. :)

Hey this poem was really good and I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme. You said that you were sorry that the poem was lengthy but I disagree. Sure it's not ...

I really like the poem. There is a special message behind it. I really like the repetition of the word "inside". Even though I don't usually like poems that rhyme ...

For His Life his eyes burned with anger, his stare directed at the walls, the walls confining him, the man cried, for what he had done, for who he had ...

I really liked the poem but it feel like you wrote it once and then posted it without even really editing it. I can understand where this poem is trying ...