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Re: them hearts, what are they?
art has many critics. Writing has more. why? because writing is an art form that is left to the imagination of the reader to picture what they are trying to ...
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Re: It's the things you don't hear...
such a song of the mind. a visual representation of the inner soul of the human body. I loved it. couldn't do better myself.
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Re: To a rose with no thorns. Sin Espinas
Deep dark desire. Hidden in a liar. To one's self, tears do flower. Growing to the eyes, dripping down in their mouth they sour. From the eyes to the nose ...
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Re: OCD poem
Ok... if that didn't make anyone tear jerk, i don't think they'd have a soul. I don't know per-say what it is. Even if i Googled it i wouldn't have ...
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Re: To My Departed Lover
I read it as someone that misses their lover so much it's caused them to get sickly and ill. Maybe i'm wrong but i did enjoy this. I may read ...
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Re: A Grand Bouquet
UM... Yeah... wow. May i ask what enticed you to add this and to try to consider this poetry as regards to you're yeahs'?
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Re: The Smell of Time
time it's self is an interesting thing. it's perception of time is different to all people. If this is a disortation of a poem talking of how time is percieved ...
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Re: save my vanity(edited not much but cleaned up)
Ok... war is often used with us being family, all decending from Adam and Eve. It's a given that this was put on. The theory here is was what it ...
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Re: A Riddle
i riddle in how much this poem needs to be awesome? i dont get the title. other than that i loved it! the description was spot on but at the ...
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Re: soul-less blue eyes
no not really. just a sad moment where i felt trapped and lost. had to write something, to take the edge off.
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Re: The First of Spring
the slug on the dandilion was cool. more of like a beauty and beast thing! all other ones were breath taking! just.. amazing. keep it up. writing and photography are ...
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Re: Dried Apricots
if tarentino was a real writer, thats what he would say. thats the title, thats the anger. love, pain, suffering... everything. i can see that phone flying through my mind, ...
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Re: I never knew
so very welcome.
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Re: soul-less blue eyes
Soul-less blue eyes. Empty shell; where he lies. Tears left his blue eyes dry. Gone are all his memories and times. Starving for another try. Now are the days where ...
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Re: I'm not who you think I am
is that animosity? pain? maybe hiding a hurt overly exposed heart. either way, short but sweet. not bad at all. just shows only raw emotion not an actual skill. which ...
Nov 4, 2009
