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Re: 14 Songs Chapter Three
This chapter was good- I just think you're rushing it. An all-too common mistake. She hated him, remember? She shouldn't be hugging him in c3. Just something to think about ...
Jan 27, 2011
This chapter was good- I just think you're rushing it. An all-too common mistake. She hated him, remember? She shouldn't be hugging him in c3. Just something to think about ...
Jan 27, 2011
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