snowtiger

Romantic Novels Re: 14 Songs Chapter Three
This chapter was good- I just think you're rushing it. An all-too common mistake. She hated him, remember? She shouldn't be hugging him in c3. Just something to think about ...
Jan 27, 2011

But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)