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  • Romantic Novels Re: 14 Songs Chapter Three

    This chapter was good- I just think you're rushing it. An all-too common mistake. She hated him, remember? She shouldn't be hugging him in c3. Just something to think about ...

    Jan 27, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge