snoopysoap

yeah i wasn't to sure if this bit was to early, now as you were saying, half-siblings don really have sex and stuff but remember they aren't related they are ...

thanks Lauren, i have this problem with commas my dad says everytime he reads something of mine, 'you have an attack of the commas did you?' it's because my pinking ...

chapter 2 Saturday 14th of August 2005, 1:00 am I tried to scream but no sound came out. The car hit so hard I was sure it would crumple like ...

this is really good though you have some typos and you just need to fix them up, but apart from those few little bits and pieces its really good...i want ...

thanks i will try to keep these things in mind and i will fix it up as soon as possible :thud:

i am not sure that my first chapter is what i want it to be. i hope you enjoy reading, you can be as harsh as you want in your ...

i think you should go head and write more and post it on here but put a little bit more detail in and it might seem better but this is ...

This again fits with the other poems I have submitted on here, which all tell the story of a girl who eventually commits suicide. Once I stood in my human ...

hey katie-pops!!! well considering i cant write storys if my life depended on it i think i can't join this group *sigh* :'( but anyways i think i might *when ...

this is brilliant work.... myself i would have no idea where to start to write something like this, but then again i have never been good a writing stuff like ...

hmmmm. you've given me inspiration thanks... maybe it will make my work a little better. how can i make mine better? this is one of my works though it isn't ...

People of the Earth The Earth shudders. As it moves. Disaster affects others. But we all lose. People of the Earth. Listen to these words. These words have their worth. ...

thanks everybody ill remember that! another question if someone makes you their friend can you see them as someone who has added you or what... do you get a notification ...

hey everybody I'm snoopysoap and I'm new and i was wondering if people would be able to show me around and answer my questions well here's a little about myself ...

um... my poems are pretty gay but i want other people to see them and have their say so i am putting one in and yeah its called Raindrops.... i ...