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When I had regained my composure I looked back up at him, he was a strange looking character; he looked like the others but more regal, more arrogant and sure ...

I didn’t notice Daniel changing until I heard a sharp cracking noise, I looked over to where he was last standing and saw instead a huge disgusting wolf in his ...

Saturday 14th of August 2005, 6:59 am Royal Children’s Hospital of London Pain. Lots and lots of pain. I woke up in a strange bed, in a strange place. I ...

Backstabber, Murderer, Dream-killer, Soul-stealer, Heart-Breaker. LIAR. Stealing us. Keeping us. Taking us away. Keeping us forever. Stealing our Soul. Breaking our Hearts. Killing our Dreams. We tell

thanks kaka...where should i put it then? short stories perhaps? hey we all get yelled at some point when we are in our zone or having fun :p

I wrote this today during class, as you read this you will probably guess that it is about a guy. Well yeah it is, it's about a guy and his ...

i love it...very descriptive, although you have a few typos... u spelt thigh thy...thigh as in leg? yeah XD just pointing that out :p

very odd... i like it though, its a different way to write poems...keep it up. i like the bit with the building blocks, very smart... i like the last verse ...

i think that your poem is a very good start to writing poems in general. poems don't always have to ryme though that is what traditional poems do. your poem ...

ok first off this is just confusing, if dyour nothing then how can you have eyelids and such? anyways, were you quoting V for Vendettea? its an awesome movie by ...

i like it, it creates an image in my mind, but i think you could describe the scenery a bit more, i mean i know that its not a story ...

be as harsh as you want, review please pleasepleaseplease thanks Soap :thud:

ok first off there are a lot of words that you have used in the wrong tense, to fix these you should read it out loud to a wall or ...

ok the blue is the editing, i cant spell or do this right :D "You took your time coming for me, I’ve been waiting these last two years at least!" ...

hey durrie! i find that you lose me sometimes in your writing, it's just haphazard, you need to rethink some of your sentence sructures and stuff. i know i can't ...