snoopysoap

yeah this was alright but i would have to say, it didn't really give much imagery. even if it isn't one of your best it was an alright read. ok ...

this was a really good read! there aren't too many mistakes or misaps that i could find, and the ones that i did have been noted and suggestions have been ...

this is really good. can i just say the only thing i can? ....EPIC... there are a few things here and there that could be improved on and i think ...

hehehe lol. now why does that last one look so familiar??? xD

A boy in my class Staring at the grass Looking through the window Out into the meadow A boy in my class Staring at my heart Looking at my soul ...

hey this was cool, i liked it! as was said by Lava, it is a bit info dumpy and you could use better descriptive words (although it is really good ...

hey this is really good although it is a bit short, but some people enjoy short prologues! i really want to find out more! this is actually really interesting i ...

hey there! i know i'm a terrible writter and all (jks XD) can you review these for me please? *batters eyelids* and if you want to review other chaptes go ...

hey me again! this is actually very good, it has potential, keep writting! just watch your grammar and punctuation, you have a couple of typos there but i'm not sure ...

yeah thanks Teardrop, i started writting this a while ago and my gramma and punctuation is was terrible, but rest assured it is way better now, i haven't been writting ...

yeah sorry about the repeat, i must have done it twice O.o accidents happen though. yay reviews! feeel free to be as harsh as you want, critisism is welcome

hey thanks guys, i find that whne i write stuff like this it seems better to be just one big block of text then spaced out becauuse i fell that ...

I pressed my back up against the wall so that I could see both ends of the alleyway, cops were swarming over the cars, a few that were brave enough ...

I could tell immediately that I was going to win, and Tyler’s stance and facial expression said he knew too. He was thinking I’m going to die therefore preparing himself ...

hey i really enjoyed this... the funny thing is that this is actually true, because that is what human kind does. i couldn't find much to complain about XD just ...