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Re: Things she Learnt to Lie about [needs help please review]
haha yeah ok. i'd love to read it when it's done.
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Things she Learnt to Lie about [needs help please review]
i think it's good how it is you know. and i just finished the things they carried and i liked it a lot, which is why i came back :). ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: Things she Learnt to Lie about [needs help please review]
Isn't "Lyra Doesn't Lie" what was engraved into the windowsill? Which is why it's in quotes. Maybe if the last comma was changed to a colon it would be clearer.
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: The execution
i know it's monty python humor but it reminds me way way too much of Life of Brian (which i love). isn't there a scene almost exactly like this in ...
Mar 30, 2009
