snickerdooly

Warning this short story has the issue of sexual abuse. Hope you like my story telling, I'm trying to do different stuff, sorry if you don't like it. Comments would ...

Did they misplace it? Break it, Burn it, Take it? I feel lost without it. The more the skies clear, The more I doubt it. What more could someone ask? ...

I thought this was filled with tons of emotion and anguish, I liked the format of the poem and the description that was inside it. The only thing that you ...

Hi, I thought this piece was stunning and beautiful! I could feel your pain, joy, and pre-game jitters. But unlike some stuff that the other reviewers said is that I ...

I thought this was really cute! Corrections in red, comments in blue. There is an emptiness deep down, below the sad face and frown. (This is my favorite stanza :)) ...

Hi, I loved this chapter it was a big key in the story because you finally found out the extent of Ashling's powers. Other than some spelling errors and the ...

Oh my godddd.............. I'm crying right now this was really incredible. The emotion in the letter was so strong and overwhelming, then the end note was amazingly creepy and made ...

I have no idea what this piece of poetry is but it definitely came from someplace in my mind. Please do not take this incredibly serious but if you enjoy ...

Loved this poem, it was a very creative way to rant. Yet it was poetic and beautiful :) Haha I'm not going to say that I've never worn short shorts ...

I wrote this about a year ago when I was going into highschool, so now that I'm through with freshman year I've decided to post it here on YWS for ...

Sorry that I do not have a proper review, but I loved this chapter it was filled with many emotions and I extremely enjoyed reading it. I only saw minor ...

I don't have a review to give you, but you don't need one anyway. I just wanted to say that the way you told this was simply brilliant and really ...

I really enjoyed this poem though it did not have a main idea or core (I think that was the point :)) It defininitly contained emotions and feelings. I could ...

Hey I absolutely love this story! It is very interesting and engaging, the creative outline and plot is great and there are even twists and turns that suprised me! There ...

Hey I haven't read the other chapter but this was really good, it had great grammer and the way you wrote the story flowed very well. I also love the ...