snickerdooly

I really liked this piece, I've read slam poetry before and listened to people at different slam poetry contests so I know that slam poetry is all about emotion and ...

The funeral. I sighed in the cold december air. It was one of those days, where the cold chills of the air made everything seem clearer. Painfully clear. I was ...

If you could see this world. The trees and the branches . The bugs and animals. All of the beautiful life here in Africa. The land is filled with water. ...

Brothers Part 1 James Caraway only sat down in his chair when he looked across the table. His heart sank like a stone. This part is confusing what did you ...

I scanned over the documents with wide, bugged eyes. My heart was pounding the whole time as reality slowly began to hit me. I made a checklist, on a blank ...

I thought this was very beautiful it that it told a really good story, the only problem that there was, was that the poem told a story but did not ...

Colorful veils , Jeweled hip scarves , Shimmying to the beat of the drum . Swaying to the rhythm of the arabian music , Hands and arms making waves . ...

All hearts can break, And lost dreams fade. Such fragile things, Like butterfly wings. This stanaz is my favorite it was very sweet and beautiful! So beautiful, so insecure, So ...

C ries lurk every room , S uicide around the corner , M addening , W anting this to end , W hy? W hy?! T he wonderer ' s ...

Hi! Snickerdooly here to review! :) It's me Who like a burglar Leaves your house Covered in The velvety softness Of an early morning And the lingering smell Of your ...

I've got stresses up to here, This part sounds a little strange, not sure how you could change it though Constant whispers in my ear Keep my grades high, keep ...

Hi! I really liked this poem it was creative and unlike a lot of the other poems that address gay/lesbian relationships. It was very refreshing to read and gave me ...

Hi! I enjoyed this poem a lot I thought it was really creative and it flowed very nice. But the only thing that I think you should fix is the ...

This was really amazing! I was also sexually abused by several members of my family, here on YWS I've tried to write poems and stories in order to help me ...

Blue sky's, Green grass, The perfect time in which to bask. The sun's high, There's little clouds, Beginning the start of endless crowds. Flower petals, Tall tree's, The lovely smell ...