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Re: Blue Oceans (1 of 2)
I wrote this a while ago but I've been wanting to write more like it, so I'm writing a second one that will have the same concept but with a ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: And so I write.
I thought this was truly beautiful and to me the perfect poem shows the pain and heartache of that person. I like how you wrote this and posted it on ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: No More Judging
We touch the lives of whoever we meet. It’s like we feel each other’s heat. Most of us train ourselves to be perfect, But let’s face it is it really ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: What is
I like this piece, and it flowed very well. But the only problem I had was the ending seemed not finished, that might just be me but I feel you ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Daddy, Where Are You?
Rough calloused hands gently hold me, I could feel your love, From miles away. You were going to watch me shine, And watch me live my life, Where did you ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Secret Morning
I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the sunrise. Don’t tell anybody. That ruins it. I like his part it's cute and creative :) The grumpy moonlight clouds, Shove ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: That Silent Face
That's not me screaming in the night. I'm asleep, filtering dreams from reality Trying to find a way back to who I am— Darkness cannot hide me from myself. But ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Nine (Part 1 of 2)
Astorial’s eyes lit up as if on fire. Something flashed in them, something that Anna couldn’t identify. With sudden brutality, he let out a howl before screaming, “Yes! Oh yes! ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: It's All In The Mind (Part 1)
I’ve never really understood the imagination. I’ve tried to look at various interpretations about it, over and over and I…I find nothing. My mother always says that some things, like ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Nine)
I think you should change the title, that's just my opinion maybe to something shorter :) I sat on the fountain in the courtyard waiting for Malfoy and our “ ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The End: Chapter One
When I was a little girl I thought that the world would live forever. That nothing could destroy it or hurt it. Never did I imagine or even realize that ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Dialogue
Mr. Paulo Friere and Mr. Bell are two teachers that work at OPRF high school are sitting at a table, along with their friend Mr. A.S. Neil who is a ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Dog waser in S.A running away from bear
A dog washer in South Africa running away from a bear I think you should work on the intrduction and try to develop it more There was once a dog ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Flotation Devices
Hey I'm Snickerdooly! I know you posted this 6 years ago but I thought it would be cool to read writing on YWS when it was relatively new. I liked ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 10 - 13 (Edited)
The following twenty-nine hours were the longest in Esti’s life. She had exhausted her small supply of food while continuously wondering why her captors hadn’t emptied her backpack when they’d ...
Jun 26, 2011
