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Edits in red, comments in blue :) I woke up sputtering and gasping in Dr. Richards’ house. Through the dim glow of the sun (I took out the word, from ...

Edits in red, comments in blue :) I woke up sputtering and gasping in Dr. Richards’ house. Through the dim glow of the sun (I took out the word, from ...

I have read chapter one and now this and all I can tell you is I really enjoyed reading them, I like the idea of the victorian era but that ...

Wow I really liked this piece forgive me but at first I thought it was going to be cheesy but then I read it and it was amazing! The imagery ...

For as sure as the wind blows, Your lifetime has passed, As sure as the moon glows, Your memory will last. This stanza has good rhyming going and I like ...

I thought this poem flowed really well and the imagery and words that you gave to the readers was really great. I found no mistakes or problems that jumped out ...

Theoretically thinking, the space from thine eyes to his weak but steady frame is longer than the Earth to the sun. With a careless whisper, a disease begins burning him ...

Wow this was fricken awesome! (pun intended) It was insanely clever and at first I thought it would just have a stupid ending about how awesome he was but you ...

All comments are in blue and edits are in red. Rare flowers and warm scarves bec o me wilted (I think if you take out the word and it would ...

Tonight, in my dreams, I dug a hole that reached to the bowels of the Earth. As I crawled out, hands pulled at me holding me down, but I reached ...

The freckles in our eyes, Are mirror images, They disguise, The true meaning of our lives. Childhood dreams, Hopes and fears, Control our lives throughout the years. Without these dreams, ...

Amazing! Very entertaining, I loved how you cussed in it, it also helped people relate to Harry Potter more. Or at least it helped me relate to him more! Thanks ...

This piece was very unusual and I was (please forgive me) thinking that I would not like it but I actually believe it had a different sort of flow and ...

Thanks for the reviews and dylan thanks for having me be your first review! Thank you!

This piece was amazing and very insightful, I liked the new perspective you brought to the whole Harry Potter theme that has been seen since the final movie came out. ...