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Wow I really liked this! I liked how you didn't have punctuation it made it extra special and different. The only thing was I got a tiny bit confused on ...

Sliding into the front seat I grip the steering wheel tightly, first day of school. Junior year, second year at this school. Transferred halfway through freshman year, forced to attend ...

Chapter 9 A sharp pinch wakes me up. Opening my eyes I see Sam standing over me, his eyes are amused and bright. “Time to wakeup, my sleeping beauty.” He ...

Chapter 6 Suddenly I hear the click and groan of the rusty door that leads into the bathroom, shutting the water off I hear heavy breathing. Jerking the towel off ...

Chapter 5 For hours and hours I’m tied to that pole, my bladder feels about ready to explode, and my face is dewed with sweat. As I sit there I ...

CHAPTER 2 The morning light finds its way into my bedroom, streaks of light rest on my face. Stretching my neck and yawning. I think of how glad I am ...

Hi. I really liked this. I've never read anything like this before so it definitly sparked my interest. I liked how you had your puncuation. But I don't want to ...

I'm studying World war 11 right now and Italy was in the war. There were several other wars that began because of Germany innvading PolaND. But other than that I ...

Wow I liked it a lot even though it was a bit brutal. I'm not complaining. I read it twice trying to look for errors but either I am very ...

Chapter 8 "Oh..." I groan and strain to sit up but I can't, prying my eyes open I discover I’m tied to a chair. In front of me, Sam is ...

I thought this was really great and something very diffrent.But a suggestion, try to make the first section a bit more interesting. Something that you can get drawn into. I ...

Yes you need to go through a fix the gramatical errors but other than that i foundit very interesting! Please post more.

Thanks guys! I'll fix the formatting this instant... wait not quite. Thanks for the comments this poem came from the heart and yes kristachouinard I am 13!

This is really funny! I like it. Totally understand your humor even if at times it was a bit... hm......... strange. :wink:

I am from crazy intricate, painted ponies. From liquid detergent And fire baked Oreos. I am from dancing, arm flailing fun. And overpowering smells of greasy fake Chinese food. I ...