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It's longer that stuff I usually write, but here it is.... Think what you want. Burn it if you wish. ---------------------------------- I always thought that when I died, I would ...

I know this sounds strange but this poem makes me want to cry, especially after reading your comment about how your insperation for this poem was from men beating their ...

Hey Soul Saver I really enjoyed this poem! After looking at your first draft I think after you edited it, it really helped it! Job well done, By the way ...

My edits are in all caps. You have seen my pain and sorrow, YOU HAVE heard my hurt-filled cries. Without a second thought my routine I will follow And treasure ...

My edits are in all caps. Their is blood on the rug, on the dining room chairs, streaked up the walls, it's under the stairs. 1. Blood in the bath ...

My edits are in all caps. " I have a jar of butterflies. would you like to come and see? My favorite is this blue one with green patterns on ...

I liked everything about this the only thing you need to do is go through and fix punctuation mistakes. Sometimes when I read poetry I get stuck on the rythming ...

To my dearest Heart, I swim across the oceans, I swim across the seas. I fight the biggest battles. I lay under seige. You ask why I suffer, and keep ...

Okay Baywolf25 I really enjoyed this story and I think you have a great plot, I can clearly see that you put a lot of thought in to this novel ...

I really liked this! There where some confusing parts in the beginning, for example: When he says he had to make the unicorn not a virgin, is the girl a ...

I havn't seen any of yours lately nor have I really told you what i think but I liked this one a lot. I dont know if it's just because ...

Okay I don't have enough time for a reveiw but i'll be back. What can I say... WOW! Are you really only tweleve? That was amazing, it was really interesting ...

This is really interesting, i like the names of the characters and the way you begin the story. But you need to go through and re-read it becasue if you ...

Pride, Prejudice and Zombies The idea of zombies always seems to spark the minds of everyone; the idea of zombies is wrong and sick. The idea of zombies is crazy ...

Death is the instant when you close your eyes and your heart ceases to beat. The friends and family remembered you for your quite demeanor and kindhearted face. But they ...