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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It's watching you undress

    A dark shadow haunts you. It knows your address. It's been watching you undress. It knows your every success, and your every mess. It has been watching your progress, and ...

    Nov 26, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Sadly, It's Life (Chapter One)

    Mkay, so first chapter of a story i'm writing. The romance will come in most likely during the second or third chapter so keep on reading. The fist chapter is ...

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Silence

    wow this was freaking amazing (pardon my french) I really liked it my favorite was the first verse! Great job!

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: To Die Young

    Thanks for the review!

    Nov 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Dying Mother Earth

    We burn the forests and kill the trees. We force the earth upon her knees. Ruling the earth with an iron fist, defiance flashes across Earth’s lips. She fights back ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: To Die Young

    Go to this Link for the song "If I die Young" By the Band Perry. This song and I had a relative who died recently he took his own life, ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Society hates me

    I like this a lot but you should go through and proof read one more time. i see where your coming from when writing i think of the same thing ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Being a Teenager

    Loved it! Definitely true!

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Princess killer

    I like this you just need to go over it one more time and edit the simple mistakes! Love the way you make your poems about things that are difffrent

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This Man I See

    Kyllorac, thanks for the review and the really rude way of telling me I'm a hopeless poet. Maybe next time you review someones writing you should take a deep breathe ...

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This Man I See

    My heart dies within my chest, His golden eyes seek my pain, His perfect lies fight to regain. This man I know, Regains his friends, This man I know makes ...

    Oct 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Love is cancer

    What are you published in?

    Oct 14, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Dear god, I killed my husband

    WOW! I enjoyed this so much!

    Oct 14, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Love I See

    Thanks! I'm not the greatest at spelling :)

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Love I See

    Golden floors appeared around him. Light shines down the right hall. The voice of a woman echoes down the left hall. Turning his head from left to right. Frost collectes ...

    Sep 30, 2010


If I'm going to burn, it might as well be bright.
— Frank Zhang