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Re: It's watching you undress
A dark shadow haunts you. It knows your address. It's been watching you undress. It knows your every success, and your every mess. It has been watching your progress, and ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Sadly, It's Life (Chapter One)
Mkay, so first chapter of a story i'm writing. The romance will come in most likely during the second or third chapter so keep on reading. The fist chapter is ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Silence
wow this was freaking amazing (pardon my french) I really liked it my favorite was the first verse! Great job!
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: To Die Young
Thanks for the review!
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Dying Mother Earth
We burn the forests and kill the trees. We force the earth upon her knees. Ruling the earth with an iron fist, defiance flashes across Earth’s lips. She fights back ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: To Die Young
Go to this Link for the song "If I die Young" By the Band Perry. This song and I had a relative who died recently he took his own life, ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Society hates me
I like this a lot but you should go through and proof read one more time. i see where your coming from when writing i think of the same thing ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Being a Teenager
Loved it! Definitely true!
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Princess killer
I like this you just need to go over it one more time and edit the simple mistakes! Love the way you make your poems about things that are difffrent
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: This Man I See
Kyllorac, thanks for the review and the really rude way of telling me I'm a hopeless poet. Maybe next time you review someones writing you should take a deep breathe ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: This Man I See
My heart dies within my chest, His golden eyes seek my pain, His perfect lies fight to regain. This man I know, Regains his friends, This man I know makes ...
Oct 24, 2010 -
Re: Love is cancer
What are you published in?
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Dear god, I killed my husband
WOW! I enjoyed this so much!
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: The Love I See
Thanks! I'm not the greatest at spelling :)
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: The Love I See
Golden floors appeared around him. Light shines down the right hall. The voice of a woman echoes down the left hall. Turning his head from left to right. Frost collectes ...
Sep 30, 2010
