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Don't Forget Close your eyes and think of joy, Close your eyes and think of fun, Close your eyes but do not think of the pain you have already done. ...

Redemption Value Warm blankets on a soft bed. Tonight on this pillow I will lie my head. Pondering upon your cruel deeds, Of the misfortunes we all have come to ...

I really enjoyed this poem, the moral of the story is something that I deeply beleive in so thank you for posting! This was actually pretty simple written and you ...

I like this, it has a very good idea and dark twisted side to it. Some of the rythme is a bit forced and so I think you should go ...

I liked this a lot and thought it had a really simple flow to it that made it very poetic, but the only thing that bothered me was some of ...

Where do I submit my writing piece I was planning on just pressing on the picture thingy on the home page but then it's not there anymore and I had ...

This was really great! I loved out it was so vividly described in detail and similies, also I understand where you're coming from in this writing piece and I hope ...

This was really interesting and I could definitely feel the motherly love, the way this was written was very smooth and clear, I also loved the idea for it. Sorry ...

Simple. True. Deadly. Cruel. Enchanting. Dark. Broken hearts. Dehumanized. Degraded Incredibly hated. Starved. Beaten. Stripped. Weakened. Nazi members. With hate to their core. Jewish people. With no

This is a really great piece! I love the way you describe the things in the poem like the water and the stones of despair, also your word choice is ...

Haha amazing, gorgous, spectacular! This made me laugh I even read it twice and even laughed the second time. Thanks for this, it definitly made my night! -Snickerdooly

Thanks guys! I tried to edit it up a bit and clean up some of the stuff that doesn't need to be there also I tried to make my thoughts ...

Disapearing Door My heart burns beneath my chest, What words are where said are put to rest. What makes me hurt is something cruel, But I only hope it doesn't ...

The Little Girl didn't deserve what you gave her. You acted as if it was normal, but it was not. Your cruel actions and sick twisted, Mind will make sure ...

Ugly Mirror, Pretty Mirror, Haunting my life; One an elixir, The other a knife. Ugly Mirror, Pretty mirror, My dear love and fear; Pity only one of you Can ever ...