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Kimalane21 I appreciate your comments/review and I just want to say that if I told you the answers to all those questions it would be way to long and probably ...

Wow I thought this was really interesting and had a great story and a different way about it, the only thing is you need to read through it a couple ...

Hey this was really cute and fun! I liked it :) Thanks for posting! Peace, SnickerDooly

The actions I've made, creep down my throat. They've began to burn, Why did I do it, why do I care? They were my grandchildren, my sweet dears. Their lives ...

Hey Snickerdooly here, I really liked this poem it had a lot of feeling in it and great descriptions! I think you should have it rythme a bit more to ...

I really liked this piece it had major thought and meaning to it! (My edits and comments are in blue) In time, they say, all will come to an end. ...

A retired Emery County sheriff's captain was charged Wednesday with four counts of aggravated sexual abuse of a child, a first degree felony. For full article: What do you think ...

This was a good poem and it flowed very nicely, one thing that you should work on is giving more details or insight into what is happening in the poem ...

Hey guys thanks for reviewing!! I edited this piece and added to it, I also changed the idea of the poem a bit hope you enjoy! Feedback would be great. ...

Warm blankets on a soft bed. Tonight on this pillow, I will lay my head, Contemplating upon your cruel deeds. Forced to remember those fearful times. You have taken away ...

This was really good I enjoyed it a lot, the piece ran very smoothly and was really humorous and sounds like exactly what I'm doing right now. Oh yes I'm ...

This was really good, it flowed really well and the ryming was really good. I didn't notice anything about the ryming that was forced or bad which is really good ...

Wow so beautiful, and very true. I enjoyed this poem very much I love it when writers post unorganized pieces that are long but still interesting. Great work on this ...

I really enjoyed this, I loved the way you created a french poem and then put it into english. Though I know very little french because I am only in ...

Wow I really like this piece! You did a great job planting a picture in the readers mind. My only suggestions are in the parentheses below. Poison kisses that taste ...