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This is so amazing. There is absolutely nothing wrong with it in my eyes, the narration was great and just the overall meaning of the story was incredible. Even though ...

I don't have a real review because all I can really say is wow! It flowed , the meaing of the poem and the cruel yet beautiful story that it ...

Wow I really loved this piece! It was abstract but to me made total sense. I loved the bit about drenching yourself in gasoline and lighting a spark, it created ...

I really liked this poem it flowed nicely though I did think the ending ended too abrubtly, whuch kinda ruined the flow of the poem. So I suggest making at ...

Inspiration conspires at the tips of my fingers, never reaching the keyboard but always forming words in my head. The block of writers that form together in the world conspire ...

Amazing! This was really eye opening and really interesting to read, thanks for posting! I don't have anything bad to say!

With flaming pitch forks and frozen rocks we build ourselves apart. We get closer but further away with every word. You say we are together but so clearly we are ...

I really loved this poem, one because it was creative and unique two because I love Alice In Wonderland both the movie (movies) and book. I thought it did seem ...

Edits are in red. Comments in blue. :) She finds The lipstick on his collar Dark red Menacing Smeared across the whiteness of his shirt This is a great into ...

I really really really liked this poem (Sorry for overusing the word really :)) It flowed really nicely though at times the repetition of the word could was overused. I ...

I really liked this, it had great rhyming and rythme. The overall message was great, I'm suprised you didn't get more comments and likes because I think this deserves to ...

This poem was really interesting it was one of those poem where you interpret what it means to you, or that's at least how I read it. I thought it ...

So I really liked this, but there's a few quick things I'm gonna fix for you :) Comments in blue edits are in red. It's been a while since; You've ...

Wow, I really love this piece! The whole thing flowed very well and the rhyming was all really great, I liked how you wrote about two different people who were ...

I really did like this poem it had a good flow to it though the rhyming at times was a little rough, I liked how you transitioned into the poem. ...