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Hi! I liked this piece a lot, it was really funny, and I could easily see your feelings of anger and emotion in this. The similies and metaphors were really ...

Okay thanks for the review, I fixed the whole plural "theives," thing and I'm really thankful you pointed that out because that is a tad bit embarrassing. But I have ...

Yellow eyes, Rotten teeth, The nasty mind’s, of the world's worst thieves. Stolen purses, Stolen cars, Missing thousands, of objects including our stars. Without the stars, Without the cars, I ...

Wow I loved this but I have a really funny story. So the other day I read this piece and I was like oh my god this is amazing so ...

Hi!! I loved this poem so much it made me smile with the biggest and brightest smile! Thank you for that, I thought this poem was really good with the ...

This was really good I loved it and I don't want anyone to take this in a bad way but I like stories like this that tell about someone being ...

No!!! This does not suck at all, I have read and written far worse. I actually enjoyed this I thought it was really simple and true. I always wonder what ...

Wow this is a great poem! I love the way it is sad and heart wrenching, I can relate to this poem in almost every sense and judging from the ...

I agree with the other people, I loved this piece of writing it was really beautiful and the reasoning in it made sense especially when talking about such a touchy ...

Hi guys! I really liked this poem it flowed really well and the rythme in it was really good. (Edits in red) The only thing that picked at me a ...

If only I could live in a dreams. Rivers and streams would have neverending crystal clean water. The sky above our heads would never dare to turn a shade of ...

Wow this was great, really it was. I loved the way you write your poems with morals so smooth and interesting, sometimes you read a rythmin poem and you can ...

I like the idea of this poem and the strange format not often seen, but I don't think that these 24 words give a good clear meaning of what your ...

Okay I thought this was really beautiful and truthful, sorry for my pathetic attempt to gain a review but I did not see any nit picks that bothered me in ...

Okay I really liked this poem but is there really a definition for cliche, can it be certain topics or what? If you feel up to explaining you can message ...