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snickerdooly

  • Lyrics Re: Silent Deceit

    Wow, I loved this piece! I didn't notice anything in the lyrics that needed help or editing. Especially how well it was written and I could easily get into the ...

    Apr 30, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager

    Haha I loved this it was very catch and such a creative idea! I saw nothing wrong with the poem that really bugged me or felt out of place, other ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Struggling Wanderer

    Hi! I thought this poem was very sad and packed full of emotions, I liked the way you told it like a story which gave it more flow. But I ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Poet's Land

    I loved this poem so much! It created the most perfect image in my head, the rhyming was also really good and flowed really nicely and that is sometimes really ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Dear, YWS

    Thanks everyone!!!!! I'm soo grateful and happy! I'm featured my very first time, thanks for all you comments and likes! You're all amazing! Peace, Snickerdooly

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hate

    Hey I really liked this it had emotion and everything in it. But I'm not worried about this poem I'm sad for you! You cannot think of yourself like this! ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Between us

    Wow I loved this poem! I thought it was so beautiful yet so simple and breath taking! I felt there were parts where there was few punctuation but the content ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Dreams of a Reject

    Hi! I really liked this poem! It flowed really nicely and the idea was something pretty much everyone thinks about all the time or at least once. This piece told ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Crying in Silence

    Hi! I could easily feel the raw emotion and power in this poem which is always a good sign and something that I love to find in poetry. You did ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Dear, YWS

    Dear, YWS Thanks to you I never finish my homework. Thanks to you my chores are never completed. My poor family is neglected and alone. But you YWS have made ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Light the Torches

    Hi this is Snickerdooly! I liked this poem and the creative way you spelt "lite," but there were a couple things that I didn't like. The first thing was the ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Only Natural

    Hi! I liked this piece a lot it definitely showed a different style and topic/opinion. I'm just going to recap real quick on what you wrote and what I understood ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Please Stay

    Hi I'm Snickerdooly! Welcme to YWS I hope you love it here as much as I do! Some of the time I never get any reviews on my pieces but ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Secret Kisses

    Okay hi this is Snickerdooly! I only have time for a quick review, I enjoyed this poem and I thought it flowed very nicely. But there were two things that ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Painful Reminders

    Can I never just forget? Forget it even happened? Close my eyes, disappear, away. One memory or word reminds me of it all. What can I do to make it ...

    Apr 24, 2011


It's unsettling to know how little separates each of us from another life altogether.
— Wes Moore, The Other Wes Moore