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Re: Silent Deceit
Wow, I loved this piece! I didn't notice anything in the lyrics that needed help or editing. Especially how well it was written and I could easily get into the ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Teenager
Haha I loved this it was very catch and such a creative idea! I saw nothing wrong with the poem that really bugged me or felt out of place, other ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: A Struggling Wanderer
Hi! I thought this poem was very sad and packed full of emotions, I liked the way you told it like a story which gave it more flow. But I ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: A Poet's Land
I loved this poem so much! It created the most perfect image in my head, the rhyming was also really good and flowed really nicely and that is sometimes really ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Dear, YWS
Thanks everyone!!!!! I'm soo grateful and happy! I'm featured my very first time, thanks for all you comments and likes! You're all amazing! Peace, Snickerdooly
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Hate
Hey I really liked this it had emotion and everything in it. But I'm not worried about this poem I'm sad for you! You cannot think of yourself like this! ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Between us
Wow I loved this poem! I thought it was so beautiful yet so simple and breath taking! I felt there were parts where there was few punctuation but the content ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: The Dreams of a Reject
Hi! I really liked this poem! It flowed really nicely and the idea was something pretty much everyone thinks about all the time or at least once. This piece told ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Crying in Silence
Hi! I could easily feel the raw emotion and power in this poem which is always a good sign and something that I love to find in poetry. You did ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Dear, YWS
Dear, YWS Thanks to you I never finish my homework. Thanks to you my chores are never completed. My poor family is neglected and alone. But you YWS have made ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Light the Torches
Hi this is Snickerdooly! I liked this poem and the creative way you spelt "lite," but there were a couple things that I didn't like. The first thing was the ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Only Natural
Hi! I liked this piece a lot it definitely showed a different style and topic/opinion. I'm just going to recap real quick on what you wrote and what I understood ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Please Stay
Hi I'm Snickerdooly! Welcme to YWS I hope you love it here as much as I do! Some of the time I never get any reviews on my pieces but ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Secret Kisses
Okay hi this is Snickerdooly! I only have time for a quick review, I enjoyed this poem and I thought it flowed very nicely. But there were two things that ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Painful Reminders
Can I never just forget? Forget it even happened? Close my eyes, disappear, away. One memory or word reminds me of it all. What can I do to make it ...
Apr 24, 2011
