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Re: Eclipses
I really liked this it was really beautifully written, the only thing you need to work on or at least something I had a hard time with was what exactly ...
May 20, 2011 -
Re: Mother's View On My Driving
I can tell by the look on drivers faces That they're scared. Why would they be frightened? Because I just got my permit yesterday. The lines on the road, seem ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Why Didn't You Listen?
Everyone says, Pot is the best. That pot is Healthier, Than the rest. But I disagree That’s just silly. It doesn’t make you healthy, It doesn’t make you cool. I ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Part 2
I would also like for you to PM me! Thanks! I love these journals or whatever they are, it almost makes me want to start one in order to express ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Why Friend Fell
Everyone says, Pot is the best. That pot is Healthier, Than the rest. But I disagree That’s just silly. It doesn’t make you healthy, It doesn’t make you cool. I ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Live
Hi! I definitly liked this poem, it brought up a lot of good questions and emotions that made the poem interesting and engaging. The only thing that I think you ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Life and it's friends. :)
I really liked this! It was fun and interesting to read, also I thought you did a good job on talking about one topic unlike what others do. How the ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Life and it's friends. :)
I really liked this! It was fun and interesting to read, also I thought you did a good job on talking about one topic unlike what others do. How the ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: First kiss
I loved this poem and the way it flowed. Your descriptions and imagery were amazing, while there were a couple typos I suggest you just go through and read it ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: Just An Object?
Is this body that I have, really my own? When I feel my heart beating under my breast, is it my heart? Or am I just an object, created for ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
I really like this poem (I even liked it) it was simple like you were trying to do yet it adresses very deep and controversial topics. This piece was also ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: The Great Outdoors
Great, I was lost. At first I knew, where I was going, then I got distracted. There in the tree, was a small, but brightly colored bird. The breast of ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Hi My Name Is
Hey I really, really loved this piece it was so unique and different, the idea and content of it was really creative and held a lot of emotion. The only ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Hi! I really liked these lyrics and the way you gave us the link to hear the beat of the song. I listened to that while reading and I thought ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Stuff
I loved this poem it was really fun to read and also it was very simple which made it way more enjoyable! The randomness of it was there but then ...
May 1, 2011
