snickerdooly

Standing with my feet nailed into a pair of high heel shoes The sky shoots slivers of light into my eyes Ruining the perfect chance I ever had to rip ...

Why does it feel, like my life is weighed down with sorrow? Even though I know I'm, better off than other teens my age, I can't shake the feeling that ...

Laughing in our boats of roses and violets. Waves push us ashore. We tumble out of our addiction and find ourselves falling away from each other. You reach for my ...

I really liked this piece, it flowed really well and had great imagery. The only thing I don't like is the title, I feel like you would get more readers ...

I really liked this piece, I could feel the emotions in the poem even though it was only three stanzas. Also I liked the idea of being trapped and needing ...

I really loved this poem the rhyming was overall okay, except there were a few instances when it did seem forced. But I totally understand cause sometimes it's very difficult ...

Wow this piece was amazing, I loved your writing style and the abstract way in which you wrote. I had to read this a second time because I liked it ...

This is a second in a series of poems, I wrote the first one several months ago and have been thinking of writing more, so please read the first one ...

Just breathe, place one foot in front of the other. Ignore the screams, shut yourself off from the pain. Just listen, hear the right words. Ignore the wrong ones, keep ...

An image not one too many see. Not one too many wish to be. Serene and beautiful, Simply pharmaceutical. Chalk like complexions, No heartbeat detections. In a zombie like state, ...

I really liked this piece, overall it was very descriptive and gave the reader lots of unseen detail. I liked the abstract way of writing and the small bit about ...

I really enjoyed this piece it was jam packed with details and abstract ways of thinking, I saw nothing wrong with it even though at times it was a little ...

Hey I know this was posted quite a while ago but I was peeking around in your portfolio and came across this awesome piece of writing! I thought the entire ...

I wrote this poem in a way to show what the emotion suffering is and to give it personification and human like situations (Thought you would want to know before ...

The world tilts slightly I can feel it in my toes Like a deciduous tree in the fall. Red, orange and yellow leaves, But instead of leaves that are falling ...