smorgishborg

Too vague, but very fixable, and thankfully not overdone. Don’t stop, never stop, keep up with the stars follow the moons orbit, run ‘till the sunlight fades behind you. A ...

If only it was as simple as getting the punctuation right. The dance has begun, this Unholy Masquerade A melody so haunting A rhythm so sweet. So much for a ...

Smorg -- "You" shows up in a lot of my poems. And honestly, I don't know who "you" is. I could say it's some love interest or perhaps something to ...

I could talk about how the writing is beautiful, but I think you know this already. Instead I'll ask a question; So, what's the point ? There's not much use ...

Didn't do anything for me. See, Poems need to come to a point. There's got to be something I can take away from the poem. An understanding. Sadly, I just ...

Sometimes you go to the supermarket, buy a bottle of milk, have a realization about the meaning of life, and return home. Sometimes you go to the supermarket, but it's ...

Hey Kylan, this poem is a work of art! A/N: For Hannah's Contest. Painting by Pierre Auguste Renoir she would only bring her hair down in the morning, when it ...

I feel like this could be something more. Eight years gone by. Eight years he's been gone. Eight Christmases. Eight New Years. I don't like the choice of New Years ...

Guests, Again I have just settled down in the living room with some after-dinner espresso and the Arts & Style section when Maureen, who has been staring out the window ...

Hello YWS! It's been a few weeks (oh, alright more than a month) as I've been bogged down with college work (and work and work). But I promise an honest ...

Takes too long to say too little. I try to pretend, I try to stay away, But the more that I try, The more I make mistakes. You are the ...

Thanks for all the feedback. This got workshopped in my creative writing course, so in addition to all of your input, I have supplemental advice from all corners. It's funny ...

A lot of good poetry came out of the early morning. It was when the tired conversations drifted across the sprawling lawn and were caught in the swaying trees, the ...

Take a walk around town, hang out with a couple friends, eat, drink, sleep, go to school, and start writing again when you have something organic to write about. You ...

Yes, yes it seems pretty premature and presumptuous. (Nobel for alliteration?). YO OBAMA, IMA LET YOU FINISH, BUT MARTIN LUTHER KING INSPIRED THE MOST HOPE OF ALL TIME. OF ALL ...