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  • Other Poetry Re: laying foundations [edited]

    Part way there. laying foundations We are caught in that quiet space between talking and not talking "Quiet" is close. It's understated and simple, which is thematically consistent, but it ...

    Sep 16, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: All's Fair in Family and Photography

    My sister pooled her money and got a camera this year, which, to my discomfort, is better than mine. With two photographers in the family, this has led to some ...

    Sep 8, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Mosque near Ground Zero (9/11)

    Good to see the first couple posters have already debunked all the nonsense about the Islamic community center in lower Manhattan. I think all that information is finally getting widespread. ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: 2010 USA Mid-Term Elections

    It's an odd race in Minnesota for governor this year. This being Minnesota, it's a competitive three-way race, and nobody quite knows what's going to happen. Our outgoing governor, Tim ...

    Sep 1, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Favorite Song of 2009

    Waving Flag by K'nann. With apologies to... Two by The Antlers Jim Cain by Bill Callahan

    May 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Metropolitan Man and The Sewer Rat [Full title too long]

    The Climactic Final Battle Between Metropolitan Man and The Sewer Rat; Chapter Five in Issue Four of the ‘It’s A Hell of a Town’ Series A panel, with the skyline ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I will not let go of you (April Fools!)

    So based on some of your suggestions, I've re-written the words a little bit. I was also in the mood today, so I recorded me singing a bit of the ...

    Apr 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I will not let go of you (April Fools!)

    I thought of setting this to music, but it'd probably be terrible. Maybe I'll rework some of the words and post a youtube video of me singing it. *** I ...

    Apr 1, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: How do I improve on my writing skill, any suggestions?

    Hi Pen, First of all, there are no universal rules of writing - everyone does it differently. So be prepared for conflicting advice. The way I see it, improving as ...

    Mar 31, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: Book in a sentence

    The Sun Also Rises: Expats drink.

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Writing Activities Re: The Showing vs. Telling Game

    Carrie unwrapped the meticulously covered box with a fevered enthusiasm, tearing off handfuls of paper, and throwing them behind her like a dog digging in the lawn. The shreds of ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Inspection (Part 1 of 2)

    Sloppy and way too short. Felix Van Doren was having a good day. He’d successfully tailed his mark up Downwards Street, Change street name. down a couple alleys and made ...

    Mar 22, 2010
  • Fiction Discussion Re: When writing, what is your most difficult challenge?

    Ending without sucking.

    Mar 19, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: x

    Ugly, and not even remotely insightful. What is this? Perhaps I have missed some longer change in your work, but I remember you as a poet with the ear to ...

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Water

    I've never been a poet, and poems with a specific structure has been stuff I've been unwilling to touch. But this trend of YWS haiku has been bothering me, because ...

    Mar 12, 2010


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes