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Well, let's get real. There's no copyright issue that can't be solved by a good sword duel. (Now if only I could convince Warner Bros. of that.)

Yes, but will it write my stories ?

Hey! So I like this. You're not quite doing anything new with the post-apocalyptic science fiction cliche but I am assuming that this is the first chapter and that you'll ...

Hey! So I like your writing and I am especially a fan of your first and last lines but there's a lot of pretty basic clean-up that you might want ...

Just a few things: - Mentioning that you wrote this "out of boredom" is pretty much the easiest way to push people away as reviewers because it kind of implies ...

Okay, I'm done reviews for both Icaruss and peanutgallery007. Again, sorry about the delay — it's kind of a crunch time for me right now. Does anyone else want a ...

Apologies for the epic delay in critiquing. I'm here now! A couple of things: - Just out of curiosity, why did you post only the first page? I'm asking because ...

Okay, I'm here. A gazillion years late. I actually enjoyed the sparseness (er, minimalism) of the piece; I thought it worked well for the story you were telling. In a ...

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So hopefully, I have my bases covered there. It definitely sounds like you do!

Veranda is love. But after thirteen years of Times New Roman hate, I'm starting to like it at size 11 pt. Or even 9 pt. The smaller it gets, the ...

Congraaaaaatulations! With six as.

It's hard to advance a story with a "perfect character". It's hard for your readers to empathize with someone who is ridiculously perfect. It's hard for their trials and tribulations ...

A lot of people have said that it "has to fit the character's personality" for them to smoke, but I'm hard-pressed to look at my smoker-friends and see how their ...

I haven't formatted anything to send out before, but there are definitely about a hundred thousand resources on manuscript formatting that will help you immensely. Here's one. And here's another. ...