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Done! Does anyone else want anything? I'm trying to procrastinate from studying for exams so I sort of have time right now!

Hey! I'm here as requested, to take a look at the story. So you've got a premise here that you can have a lot of fun with, and plenty of ...

Aaaand, seven years later, I've critiqued it here . Apologies for the delay. It's the end of the uni year so work has kind of been killing me slowly. Anyone ...

Um, omg, I'm sorry it's taken me such a disgustingly long time to get back to you. I didn't check my critique thread till a week or so ago and ...

Hypocrit > Wow. I disagree with pretty much everything you've said. I don't think half — actually, most — of the things you listed are forms of art at all. ...

There was a Goosebumps episode like this.

I am afraid of Nate because he is a killer robot. With LASERS. I can't say more.

I think that's fine. Better to use that (cliche) phrase then try to find a long-winded pseudo-original way to say it.

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I just wanted to make a quick note of our really extensive collection of articles that talk about grammar and word use and stuff like that. ...

I'm a sucker for tragic characters and downward spirals. Not angst or whiny ones but people who are deeply flawed and (somewhat) well intentioned and find themselves hopelessly spiralling out ...

Hey. First of all, you don't need to keep bumping your thread up: people will read it eventually and start commenting. Just give them some time. (Also, the multiple posts ...

Hey. So a couple of things to start off with. Dialogue punctuation. Learn it, love it, use it. I can't stress how absolutely imperative it is to know this stuff, ...

Welcome to YWS! Like Mars said, there's a 2:1 review ratio here. Spread the love! Review other people's works and put yourself out there. The other thing is, and this ...

So here goes: Know your commas! You use commas sometimes where they shouldn't be and omit them when they are needed. So, quick review: commas are pretty much the syntax-equivalent ...

Okay. So a couple of things. First up, there's a 2:1 review ratio at YWS and it's generally recommended that before you start posting your stuff, you go around some ...