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Being a rabid Whedon fan, I'd definitely join — my only concern is, what would we do? Discuss episodes? Write fanfiction? Somethign else entirely? I'm not impartial to either idea, ...

...so. This was written for Nanowrimo 2005, an overly epic saga of late nights and too much caffeine. As a result, it obviously needs tons and tons of editing, and ...

Okay, Griffinkeeper asked me to re-post this in the Storybooks thread. If you're in this forum, you're probably already familiar with the YWS style of storybook; hopefully, we'll now be ...

Ugh, bad spelling. Thanks for pointing out why it sucks. With a dozen (or more) different spell-checking tools that can be found both online and offline, people have even less ...

Can someone please tell me what the Redwall series is about? Redwall is about a bunch of cute little animals who live in a monastary and like to eat lots ...

Yeah, I second Shadowdancer on this one ... there are teachers who want that level of familiarity with their students, for whatever reason, and therefore allow/request students to call them ...

Okay, bear in mind that everything I have to say pertains to the first post. I haven't yet read anything past the original installment. ...right. On to the story. This ...

Ew, Smallville. Yeah, I watch Smallville. (Ah, I remember the days when it was actually sort of good...) And I've got the occasional episode of "House". But, to be fair, ...

Oh, this is gorgeously written. There are a couple of grammatical errors (it's the commas; they're the kiss of death, or something close enough) and a few words/sentences that jar ...

Would you attend one if it was avaible at a community centre or library? Maybe. We do have a youth writing club of sorts -- or, we did (I'm not ...

I know I should have, but it was NaNoWriMo and I was trying to get at least 1667 words a day, and that bit wasn't even 1667 words. Then the ...

Oh ... wait, one more thing that I completely didn't notice the first time. Wearing that dark, shapeless coat, the person could be male of female, but the long golden ...

4. Password Protect your work: this only works after you finish. Still it keeps nosy parents out. For most word-processing programs (or the main ones, i.e. Word and Wordperfect), you ...

First of all -- yay, Nanowrimo! (You beat me to posting my Nanowrimo story.) More people should do this. (Nanowrimo, that is, although more people should probably post their stories ...

Just to preface my obscenely long critique: this is a great story, with tons of potential, and you're an amazing writer. I'm not the best judge when it comes to ...