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This really helped me about ten or so years ago: Make time to write. Especially the busier your life gets — you keep making excuses and keep promising yourself that ...

"Asdlkfjjk." Hangovers suck.

That's the worst. : ( I think awful things like this made me start backing-up obsessively. Anyway, welcome to YWS! If you rewrite the story and post it here, at ...

- Change the POV? If it's from one character, do it from another; if you're telling it in first person, change it to third person. - I don't know if ...

This is ... painfully extreme and overly simplistic.

I'm not gonna lie, I think this is pretty much the best thing ever. Zombies + anything = awesome. Victorian zombies + Jane Austen = seriously awesome. The book is ...

I kid you not. In the immortal words of the internet: lulz.

Avoid debt? I always figured writers wrote because they were knee-deep in debt and writing stories was the only way they could convince their creditors not to sell off their ...

Man, Darcy doesn't need a team. He's pretty much got the whole straight female population of the universe on his side.

Mr. Darcy doesn't watch me sleep. I'll take him.

Hey. Sorry it took awhile to get back to you, but here goes: I don't/can't buy that she "kills" him in any way. For a few reasons: (1) The light ...

All clear! Anyone else?

Hey! I'm here, finally. So I like this. Or at least, I like what you're trying to do with this piece. I haven't read anything by you in a bit, ...

Hey! I'm here, critiquing as requested. You asked me to point out any questions that I might have throughout the story, but honestly, I don't think I have any yet. ...

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