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I like it. It's different. A quick poem about suicide written perfectly... and sort of in a happy way. Well, not really happy but it doesn't make you sad. Just ...

Most of the invitees were blissfully unaware of the scandal taking place at the wedding. Not bothering to keep their voices down, the guests were chatting away happily, listening to ...

Hi Yuri I'm smashles and I have this Fantasy Novel that I'm writing. One of my frinds has gone over it, plus I got someone else to review it for ...

It does sound depressing and as I read it I kind of think it actually was. This was a really easy poem to read, rhyming and as far as I ...

Thanks everyone for the reviews. I've started editing it but am still a bit stuck on the ending. If anyone has any suggestions that'd be great. I started part of ...

Tears stained Alex’s face as she sobbed in her room. The last three days had been tough. Her parents and sister tried to get her to come out, but they ...

I'm no expert on paintings, but I actually think there's nothing wrong with it. Paintings are good if they're a bit exaggerated, otherwise why not just take a picture? I ...

I wrote this poem in year seven and have neglected to edit it when I found it. It's not very good so feel free to attack it :) It makes ...

Thanks :) there was a poem I wrote last year and I put it in my portfolio but now I can't find the portfolio and I'm really annoyed! :(

It's amazing how much just a few lines can have so many different meanings. I really enjoyed this poem. It holds a lot of emotion. Well done :)

I agree with the story not being long enough. Why was he crying? What happened next? Why isn't she speaking? The first paragraph did hook me, though.

I wish I could go back to the days. Those were the days when homework was to say what you did on the weekend, or draw a picture of your ...

This is a beautiful poem. I love how you used the 'rooms' in it. Very emotional. Bravo!

When I have enough time I guess I can look over it. But you know that you're a better writer than me, right?

Hi I'm Ashleigh. I like it if you would review my story, Misty Eyes. It's in Fantasy Novels. Here's the link: