smashles

Hey Georgie! This is really, really good. I seriously could not stop reading it. But there are still some mistakes I noticed. They were small wire devices that hung from ...

When the days drag on And the birds won't sing When it's dark all the time And you're caught in the wind There's a place you can go Far away ...

Hey there! This was a very interesting piece and it was pretty good but there were a few things that put me off. The first thing was that the first ...

She's a beautiful girl And she lives in a fantasy It's her little world And it's realer than she can see All of the boys They fall at her feet ...

Thanks guys! I really appreciate it. As for the sent to marry her thing it's just what they used to say, in the old days. Like they might say to ...

Okay I know you showed me this at school but seriously I loved it so much that I just wanted to tell you that I really want to read it ...

verse 1: There's a beautiful girl sitting by the river She writes in her diary when she starts to quiver She hangs her head and starts to cry They all ...

This poem really reminded me of something the band 'Evanescence' might sing. The lyrics were very deep and a little bit symbolic. It's very meaningful and I love the way ...

If I were to die It's only because you took my breath away If I glow or shine It's only because you sat with me the whole day If I ...

This was a pretty good poem. Something that really bugged me about it, though, was that the first verse rhymed and the second one didn't. You need to make it ...

“Soldiers,” Mistress Ebony addressed her recruits, all standing in a straight line in front of her, “you’re about to take part in one of the most important missions since 1856, ...

Yeah, it's okay. Fantastic? No, but you've probably got a good story line here, even though it's hard to tell from a few lines. To start with, I just think ...

Okay to start with, I'll just say: keep the capitalisation. Some poems do have little letters at the start of lines, but that should only be done if the person ...

Oooh! I do like this poem! It had my attention from beggining to end which is exactly what a poem should do. The repitition was very... intriguing. There was absolutely ...

Hey, it's smashles here for a review! I'd like to start off by saying I really like this piece. It's creative and I really like the way you've patterned your ...