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This was an interesting piece, though I've never written a collage poem myself and am not really sure how the structure is supposed to be so I'll just go with ...

My sister 'emalily' and I wrote this together when we were bored one time... Hope you like it! I fell in love with a double agent He told me his ...

Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!! Seriously I was upset when the chapter finished! I just wanted to keep reading it and find out what happened to Cherrie and Scott. ...

...she had invented a device...

Haha whoops sorry didn't realise there were more pages ;) Okay with that description I think "Ebony" or "Amber" might be nice.

Here's a fun one! We're writing a story, but you can only write 5 words of the story, and the next person continues on with another 5 words and so ...

Hello, my name is Immisteria and I am a pixie girl who has illegally fallen for a human boy.

Maynard. This is the name that MJ stands for on Desperate Housewives...

Not sure why, but I think of the name 'Harry'. Okay it's a guy, from the same era as WWI, well educated and well mannered though not stuck up. He's ...

8/10. Grabs your attention right away ;) Most of the invitees were blissfully unaware of the scandal taking place at the wedding.

This is a really nice piece you've got here. I love how the middle verses rhyme but the first and last don't. It's a very sweet, truthful bit of poetry, ...

Hey there! This is a pretty good piece, but there was one bit that bugged me. That person died of lung cancer It sounds like you're just carelessly saying it. ...

Hi! What's up? There was only one error I found in this and it was obviously accidental. There's so many thing s that I'd like to say Sometimes words are ...

He slammed his fist into the wall He pulled his hair, he felt so small He felt the tears rise in his eyes But he was not weak, he would ...

Uh... It was good, I won't deny that, but it was so dark . The only line a actually didn't like was I need somebody with an electrical socket embedded ...