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Re: The First Words You See Describe You
Loyal, insecure, naive and dramatic... Yep, sums me up pretty well!
Mar 5, 2013 -
Re: Could You?
Hey there! :) Okay so this is basically a very good, beautifully written poem, and at this point in time I have only one small piece of criticism for you, ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: 5 words
... a giant teddy bear that...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager Chapt. 4
“I have something important to tell you guys!” Dennis said excitedly as he plopped himself down across the table that Jamie and I were seated at. He grinned mysteriously at ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Life is...
Hey, it's Smashles here for a review! Hopefully it will prove helpful to you :) Life is... I don't know Okay, I don't like the "I don't know" part. It's ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager Chapt. 3
“Have you tried to find out who her real mother is?” Jamie asked the next day when I had told her about my trip to the principal’s office. “I didn’t ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Tormented Chapters 3-5
Dear Georgie, I feel bad for not getting around to reviewing this sooner because now I'm not the first person reviewing it and I wanted to be :( Nevertheless, I ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager Chapt. 2
Hester Borone blew hard on her whistle until all of the girls in her P.E. class assembled in the middle of the room. “Ladies, it took far too long for ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager Chapt. 1
“You’re wrong,” I told my friend, Jamie, as we sat down at our table in the cafeteria. “You can’t feign love. It has to be felt.” “It’s been scientifically proven ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager (Prologue)
I've noticed several recurring themes in the books and movies of teenagers in our present century; for one, they're all basically the same. You know exactly what’s going to happen, ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Abandoned Bride
Wow this is really cool. It's very abstract. I really like the real-osity of it. It's like a book by Lauren Child, where she gets real objects and puts them ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: What happens with love
Oops thanks for that it was supposed to be comes :) thanks for pointing that out for me.
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: What happens with love
I've fought with love More times than I'd liked I don't want it to happen But when love strikes There's a burning sensation That comes from within It envolopes me ...
Dec 7, 2010 -
Re: Defiance (Chapter 1)
This story is AMAZING Maddy! I truly love it! Although there were a few things that weren't quite right. Nothing major, just a few little errors. ...his gloved fi st ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: 5 words
...the porch where Gabby sat.
Dec 3, 2010
