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We can not fight more than we fought today, It can not hurt more than it has hurt today, My heart has bled for you, My sole has wept for ...

i liked it. its simple and straight to the point. it has this feeling as you read it you actual feel like all your fears have realy gone and its ...

well i just cant figer out where the story is suposed to be going, but the writing is good and the flow of what is happaning too the character is ...

well the idea is good but it does not pull through as a poem. i think it would be a great begining for a story a realy good one actualy ...

i love the idea and it drags you in to it. makes you feel involved in what it is going on its great

Can you see me I hide behind a layer of pain and untruths, I seek to let go but as I do I learn the world is cold and cruel, ...