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okay i like this and it is oviusly well thouhgt out but the fact that it does not have any commers makes it kinda hard to read. i dont like ...

i like the fact that the poem definetly has a certin tone to it and i get the meaning of the poem. but i think it seems to jump from ...

granted but people like it so much that everyone copies you and now you arnt realy individual any more. and every one is you freind but they dont realy understnd ...

Some day soon you will see, Some day baby, you will turn around and realise, You need me. Even the strong cry, Oceans will turn there tides, But what you ...

i like this it keeps the reader wondering what is the servent of light and what does he have to fight. the flow of the words is smooth making it ...

im reading the fourth book of the Malloreon: Sorceress of darshiva by David Eddings im a fantsy fanatic

i think it is a good peace of writing. and it has a good mesage about going out and achiving for your self. i escialy like the first two lines. ...

granted but there all scratched i wish my best freind was here

Never say goodbye to me, I promise to see you soon, Why do you hold such fear in your eyes? Why do I see you cry? This time, place nor ...

well i like it but it does not seem to have a real maening or direction

well its a good peice of writing but if you want it to be a poem you have to organize it like a poem. eg "My fingers are on the ...

it was a nice poem i liked the fact it rhyemed. its got a great holiday feel 8)

i like this its about freedom and become free i like the feelings it sends over when you read it but the end is sad though becoz the hope and ...

i cant get the feeling of what this is suposed to be but for some funny reson i like it. its got a rhyme sceam(sp) and that can be hard ...

sorry it's suposed to be pain i must have missed that :?