smanda4

Not really sure if you wanted someone to critique this but as I have read through it and I got a couple of things to say thought I would just ...

Really liked your story. Wondering where you are going with it, One thing i noted is watch your tenses hard i know, it’s easy to miss after you have read ...

Firstly have to admit I have not read through all the other chapters but I will soon as I get time. Greatly enjoyed reading this chapter and i really like ...

I really liked this, it flows really well and i did not have any problems reading it at all. It jumps straight into the story and builds up suspense in ...

I like your story I'm interested in where it is going. I want to know why is he the last man on earth why is he laughing all the intrigue ...

I can defiantly relate to this and threw out the whole poem I could feel the pain. I especially like the way it’s laid out with the large space’s they ...

Hey great poem. Expresses your opinion very well and in such away that we can see the writer is open to many views and has thought of the issues the ...

This was a great story. I started and did not stop reading it. In fact I regret the fact that it had to come to an end. I thought your ...

thanks everyone..................

swimming is great,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,love supporting all the African entrys in what ever event,,,,,,,

As I read this I had the feeling that the characters were very young possibly 13 threw to 15 so I must admit that I was startled when they go ...

Hi Lurlene,,,,,,, I must say I liked your story. It’s cute and sweet and has the air of good chick lit. However, it would be nice if that last paragraph ...

The boat ground slowly into the port at Liverpool. Shivering slightly in the cold, Nita leaned over the small table that took up most of the space in the cabin ...

orange

lol..... so cute i give it a 9/10.