slandie

Thanks for your advice...I did use some here. What do you think about it now ??Is it more clear ?? Slandie

Hey EmmaJane, Thnx for your advice.Once again you got I made some changes and about this " So ... there's an intruder ... oh, wait; the intruder's the cat ... ...

Creepy and desolate !!!!!!!!!! still it's enthralling....

It's a great poem you have there. Love it. Amazing. *_* PS: can u review mine too.... Thnxxxx

I really liked your was a little scary...Anyway you did an amazing job. Niceeeeee.

It’s raining the cords out there. I just got back from work…Hard day…They fired me. Flashback. "Mrs.Nate you can't work here anymore. What ? Why ? Always late. Stressing.Paranoid.Bad work. ...

I really like this story...U\You did an amazaing job. The emotions are well described and the way you kept the suspense all along was fantastic. *_* ^_^ :) :D

Tnx EmmaJane i'll think about it the next time...I Think i'm gonna start all over again ...

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