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Re: Bands you loathe
I hate most modern music. Including: Lady Gaga McFly Jonas Brothers Mily Cyrus Most Disney endorsed bands Busted JLS X-Factor winners Britain's entries to Eurovision, 1980 onwards Most Rap Most ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Tortured Soul Asylum {Act 1, Scenes 1, 2, & 3}
Wow, yhis pert of the play is powerful! I felt real empathy for the characters and it is well written. The image of the murder scene and the aftermath stays ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: You Know You're a Nerd When...
You know when you are a Nerd when your English teacher calls you one after saying when the word "dalek" entered the English Language. Bet thats never happend to you ...
Jun 9, 2010 -
Re: What isn't a good critique?
This will help me a lot. Thanks a lot, Snoink!
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Academy Redux! DT
Yes, that was pretty good. Lex Luther, dumbest-grudge-EVER!
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: When the Dragons flew.
Thanks guys! I've been on a slog recently, but it looks like I've made a comeback!
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: When the Dragons flew.
This, I don't really know how to describe. I think it is of pure description, but I can't really pinpoint what it is. Review, rate and disect! Many thanks. --------------------------------------------
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active
Arthur-8:55,Friday, Outside the Spellcasting room. As per usual, panicking. Alright, I'm here early, so no chance of being late. Pen, definitly there, so that's good. Spellbook, check, notebook, check
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Lies Like Roses and Thorns
The imagry of this piece was good, however, there is a definite battle between show and tell, here. Otherwise good work and keep writing!
May 31, 2010 -
Re: Letters from the Front 2
Thanks for that! I'll get to it when I can. But, I do have my reasons for setting them as short as a did. You see (history lesson coming up) ...
May 28, 2010 -
Re: Eradication (Scene Two)
Hey, Vas, another good script, there. The dialogue between the characters were good and realistic. The stage directions are nice and simple, so you took the actors in account. Good ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Heartbreak
I like this piece quite a lot, as it shows how vunerable people can be, but you could take out the bit where it says: "eventhough she wasnt really here" ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Hermes
I like this piece but, Moo is right, it is a piece of Narrative Poetry.
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Do the media have too much power?
I do think I am going to lock this one, it has been on the front page for a while and I would like to see you guys commenting on ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Ben Franks On: The Election 2010
I think I have commented on this in the news tab. Still, rather good article I thought.
May 21, 2010