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Re: The lovers
This quite a good interpretation of Romeo and Juliet! The whole thing followed really well and the rhyming didn't falter once. The rhythm kept up really well, too. The imagry ...
Jun 24, 2010 -
Re: Loves Curse
I like this poem, it has a lot of heart in it and it flows really smoothly! One little thing, however: "The feeling in my chest, knowing you’re the best" ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Please Mommy
Aww, this poem is really sweet! I like the way you kept the reader guessing about what has happened through out. One slight nitpick, however, "Zues" isn't spelled right, it's ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: the withering flower
I think this little poem could use, at most, one more stanza. You have some good imagry going on here but you need to enlongate it a little. The word ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: ...
This poem flows really well and the imagry of it is amazing. I do have a couple of nitpicks, however: 1. "Full of hatred and shame is coming", I think ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training: Redux - No Longer Active
Arthur-Friday-9:57am-Spell casting Classroom, you guessed it, he's panicking Ok, I'm sitting in the right place, next to the right person, on the front row of the class. So why is ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Academy Redux! DT
Woah! That's a lot of peril goin' on, there! *Skutter now posts*
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned because you used a tone of voice that sounded as if you don't like Robert!
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: A date with History. Prologue
I'll be lockin' this, as is it about 3-5 months old, alright, guys?
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Don't Read This
Lucky for me, I didn't...click...on...the...link. Ah. I'm in trouble. Oh...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Hi, I'm new! You better say hello, or else ;)
Hello, Yellow, my name's Skutter11 (named after the robots from BBC comedy, Red Dwarf) and I would just like to say: WELCOME TO THE YWS! I must warn you that ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Franks talks about Franks... (Lol?)
Hi Ben! My name's Skutter11 and I have been talking to you through the Insane Writers group and your guestbook fornthe past few months! I shall now do it all ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: A brief summary of the History Of The Universe.EDITED
Seeing as though this is a very old one, I shall lock it! :smt003
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: insert coin
You get a Cthulu! *inserts coin*
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Rain
This is something I came came up with off the top of my head ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Patterpitterpatter It hammers on the window Patt
Jun 11, 2010
