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Hi, Jess, I'm Skutter11 (bows) and I'm just here to say welcome! If you ever need a thumbs up for a piece of work, advise on writing, grammar, spelling and ...

Arthur, in one of the corridors. "The blobs are everywhere!" shouted Jen. Corda was fighting the best she could possibly do, but her strength was begining to wane. I was ...

Dunnit!

Oh phooey! I'll try again, shall I?

Here it is! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Name: Thomas West Age: 26 Personality: Not very

I know exactly where your coming from Retro. Anyway, to the matter at hand, the poem coveys the point really well, the emotions were shown in the piece really well ...

Don't worry about it!

Ladies and Gentlemen of the Academy I, skutter11, have drawn a definitive picture of Arthur! It took me a biro, three coloured pencils and two days to do! Here it ...

Well, I like this poem. Speaking as a student of Classics, I say it is completely preicise in it's facts and you've written it really well. Now, speaking as a ...

Ok, I understand that grammar isn't your strong point, but, I'll correct some little things for you, if thats alright? The "I" is always a capital if refering to yourself ...

Last part guys! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The stage lights up and the set has chan

Arthur, Potions room, Time-who knows? By the way, guys, it has come to my attention that the present tense is confusing people, so I'll be writing in the past tense. ...

Arthur, the Library, yes he's scared to death. Level 1. "What happened?" do you really want to know, Arthur? Really?, "Am I dead? Am I in Heaven? Jen, what are ...

Oh, sorry

This is quite a confusing poem, with all of it's contradictions and opposites, but strangly the structure fitted it like a glove. Just a little nitpick, "i" is in capitals, ...