skutter11

Thanks for the comments!! Scene one is on it's way!

Your good friend, Skutter11, here. I know I've read the paper version of this and I just wanted to say good one! :mrgreen:

Nice one! I think that is a very good story! :xd:

By the way, guys, if you are reading this, make sure you read the prologue FIRST!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Scene 1, Act 1 A Mugging i

I think I made a mistake in posting this one. I am quite afraid that I might get stamped as a bad writer for this one...

I loved it! I should like to know what is going on

Wow :xd:

I have been playing with this idea for a while and I hope that the result is good. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Two Students are standing

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: But I actually wanted Twilight to win because I don't like Harry Potter. Still it was very funny and a very good concept! :lol: :lol: :lol: ...

I think this story shows that people bully people who aren't as big as they are. Love the twist! The murder at the end is cleverly presented in storybook form! ...

Was this, by chance, loosley based on Thomas Hardy's "The Man I Killed"? Because it seems that the main character hates having to kill this person "When you ask for ...

It was a good story! I love the way you described the character's death at the end! MORE! :D

I agree with Winie on this one. I can vouch for what "too-many idea syndrome" is like. It does do all them things you wrote about! Good work!

This is so beutifully written! I have only been a member for a few days, but I have seen works such as this one that break the "Potter Mold". Good ...

Thank you for the critism and I will get to work editing this story. I wasn't sure of the interruption, either.