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You have written an interesting story, nice work

Nice twist and just keep writing

Is there going to be a Chapter two? I mean I am interested in what is going to happen...

Conclusive proof that the pen is mightier than the sword

Wow! Have you concidard contacting the BBC after writting it all? (If you don't know, the BBC is the British Broadcasting Corporation) It would be something to think about...

The ripping of Twilight is getting a little old, but I still liked it! Start ripping Harry Potter for his crimes against Fantasy Fiction!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Very funny!

SCENE FOUR! CAN'T WAIT!

Where's scene three? GIVE ME SCENE THREE!(Meant in a nice way)

Need more! :thud:

Very Deep. Good Job! I think that this is a good piece of scripture :smt004

Very Pythonesque. Hurrah, hurrah for absurdest Theatre! Loved it! :lol:

FINALLY! Someone who will take the upmost micky out of the scurge that Harry Potter! I would love to see this acted out! I mean if it wasn't for the ...

Thanks! I've just been playing with this cocept for a while now, so I think I shall carry it on! Onward to the 60's! :smt004

I agree with the above statments! If something they saw on the webcam is nothing to do with the theft of the Laptop, then they should just leave alone! It ...