skutter11

wow. Deep, very deep. I like it!

Skutter11: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!! Janitor: Oh, great! Now I have to carry this smiling body out as well! Skutter11: I'm not dead I'm in a laughing induced coma, you would be too,

Keep going with this story! The only time a story dies is when you give up on it. Promise that you will return to it. I'm serious!

I dunno. I think that might be a good idea...

Ha Ha, that was a good one! :lol:

I liked it. It was a lovely poem and it really makes you think about how beutiful life can be.(Wow that was deep)

I think it all flowed pretty well. You also had a good way with the imagery in these poems. Good work!

Very light-hearted. I like it!

Well I thought it was rather good, the word choice was alright...

Let me guess, the first one is about a guy who has had a really bad relationship, the second is, well, a craving for the apocalypse and the haiku... can't ...

Ok, this is my first atempt at poetry, so help, poke and dismantle, if you wish. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I listen to the wind at nigh

Hey! Liking the story! By all means continue it!

Sorry, there, but you could break it down a bit. Major headache :? . Oh and I think you shouldn't listen to Rubinlikes2write, that comment was way too harsh. Anyway, ...

Is this to be continued?

Is there a chapter two?