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Thanks guys! I'll remember these tips for next time! Well, now I have to lock this one, so people with new works get reviewed, Ok? :pirate2: Woo, new smilies!

This story is very Pytonesque and funny. The problem is that there are spelling mistakes and Grammatical mistakes through out. Editing will solve this problem.

That is the single most beutiful thing I have yet encounted on the YWS to date. All of the Imagry and the way the Guitarist influenced everyone he met was ...

If you have ever got a comment from myself before you know how they usually go, but this story is spiecial. I could actually feel sympathy for this Vampire, how ...

That poem is so sweet! The sylable pattern is perfect for it and the message was quite clear. Well done!

This is absolutly correct! High school is built up like 19th century England! This is the most apparent in British schools where it actually goes by how much money you ...

(For the story's sake I have deleted this post, by the way, I am not posting for a while, I CAN'T KEEP UP!)

As I was eating my dinner with my grandfather and younger brother, I asked my grandfather a question. It was to change my life forever. "Grandfather", I asked as politely ...

Well, this was a gripping story and in all honesty, I didn't think the character would actually go through with it. All of the emotional language blended really well in ...

This is so true. We write for control over something and if you are skillful enough, you can do it. There isn't much to review here, but the best poems ...

This could go somewhere, if you think about it. The dialogue could use a little brush up, but other than that, I think it is a ok script. Just keep ...

I liked this one because I thought it threw up some valid points. Why can't we be free? Still, back to the review, your writing style is very good, the ...

These photographs are really good! I wish I could take photos like this. What type of camera did you use, by chance?

No comments or queries? No fan mail? No critisisms?

Tar, I have really got to say that I like this poem! I am not just saying that because I am your friend, I just like it. It's not like ...