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Re: Time in a Bottle
Thanks for all the great reviews, everyone! I fixed the little grammatical things. Dreamer- I'm still not sure if I want to continue with this or not. This was one ...
Fri Jan 01, 2010 1:09 am -
Re: A dream I had, yet to be named.
Thanks, carelessaussie13 and Evi for reviewing my (sort of) story. I completely agree that Clarissa needs more development. I should probably mention that this wasn't exactly intended to be a ...
Wed Dec 30, 2009 3:04 am -
Re: Understanding
Thanks so much for the critique! evenstar09, I agree about the whole spongebob thing, it is a bit off. I should probably change it to something like, "I was sitting ...
Sun Oct 19, 2008 5:41 pm