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I've decided to be as constructive as possible with this ;] I did it again. I had to do it again. I walked down the dirt road, my legs tingling ...

Hey there! I just wanted to say I loved it. The way you portray the way she responds to the monster really makes the reader feel the anxiety, especially towards ...

Please read and leave a review! This is in fact a dream I had, and I was so inspired by the characters that I decided to write it down. This ...

Thanks so much for the critique! evenstar09, I agree about the whole spongebob thing, it is a bit off. I should probably change it to something like, "I was sitting ...

Ok, this is my first post. I really hope you like it. I would like to continue it, but for now, all I want is criticism! I'm here to improve ...

I really, really like the story. Truly, I do. It just needs more substance, more of what exactly she is thinking. As nutty above me said, her reaction to the ...

There were a few run-on sentences and grammar mistakes. It was rushed. I think you should definitely pay more attention to character devolopement and give more detail about the surroundings. ...

Thanks guys! I'm really starting to think that this will be a great site for me. Merry- I don't know what author I want to be when I grow up; ...

Well, my name's Samantha, for starters. I might as well introduce myself here. Surprise surprise, I like to write! I'm planning on becoming an author when I get older, and ...