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...and found a rabid cockroach hiding underneath the sprinkles...

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews! I wrote this poem on one of those bursts of creative energy where your almost to the point of hitting something just to release ...

Haha, not creepy at all. Actually, I already kind of do that. I'm very keen on listening in and kind of 'dissecting' what people say, how they say it. But ...

Thanks for the Critique, Bad Narrator. Yeah, I know that the main characters lack of cursing wasn't characteristic, but when I asked my teacher he did say that we had ...

First of all, just an immediate reaction, because the second I opened the box to type this reply I read the last line, and I have to say that was ...

This story is written in almost all dialogue as a Creative Writing assignment. We were supposed to portray our characters without any outside narration, Only thought or direct dialogue with ...

Thanks for the review =]. I'm glad you liked it, and I like how you described it as having a 'chant' rhythm to it. I think it's a pretty interesting ...

I can feel the words at the tip of my tongue- High-strung On the choice of a trigger- just run. But there’s an acid in the air, A taste that ...

I thought this was very charming, mistakes aside. I think Durriedog got most of the mistakes, so I'll work on flow and such. Firstly, I agree that you need to ...

Thanks a bunch =] I was pretty on-the-fence about putting this up here, because I know it's a huge cliché. I know it's simple language-wise, as well. I didn't want ...

Thanks for the reviews! You guys are right- that line is awkward. I was stretching it when I wrote it, because I wasn't quite able to find something that worked ...

First poem on here. Not the first written, haha. But the first I felt like a really wanted to share. I honestly just wrote this, on a whim. The rhyme ...

I'd just like to say that I use Chrome, and I'd definitely recommend it for people with slower computers. It's simple, a lot less cluttered, and sleek-looking. I upgraded to ...

Wow! I didn't even realized more people had reviewed this until I looked, just now. Thank's so much for all the positive reviews! I really do want to turn this ...

Thanks for the reviews =]. I agree, RedSmiles, I have to play around with the contrast on the bear photo's. And yeah, the dolls are creepy haha. I have a ...